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Daily Progress Update: Brainstorming and Character Sketches

I cheated a bit on my Thursday to-do list and got a little carried away with brainstorming and character sketches.  I gave myself a limit of 45 minutes; I ended up working for 2.5 hours, but oh man, I just couldn’t help myself.

As I’ve mentioned before, Path to the Peacock Throne has been in a bit of a muddled spot — I encountered a rather tricksy patch during a really pivotal scene that is necessary for revealing a number of truths and moving the action forward, and I haven’t quite known what to do with it.  To top it off, Liandre, my main character, hasn’t been cooperating at all.  Upon rereading the first few chapters, I’ve found her rather flat and two-dimensional, prone to such cliched actions like crying in every scene (seriously, I think it occurs in roughly 4 or 5 scenes in a row), and altogether cardboard-like and frustrating.

I’m perhaps being a bit too hard on her (and on myself), but the bottom line is that I’m going to have to do some serious overhauling… but only once this first draft is finished. Until then, I’m moving forward, though with the intent of digging deeper into Liandre’s personality, character, and motivations.

I stumbled upon the Emotion Thesaurus over at The Bookshelf Muse, and reading through the different lists of attitudes and emotions has given me much food for thought.  There is hope for salvaging Liandre from the wreckage of cliches and Mary Sue-ness. 😀

With that, the stats for Thursday:

  • General Brainstorming, Path to the Peacock Throne: 838 words
  • Character Sketches, PPT: 925 words
  • Drabbly Scenes, PPT: 411 words
The downside?  Nothing done on the thesis, with the exception of a few hastily scrawled words before my afternoon nap.  Meh, not something to be proud of, but I suppose ‘tomorrow is always another day.’  I am therefore banning all creative pursuits for Friday, at least until I get some academic stuff done.  It’s all about incentives, right?

ROW80: Super-short Update

Friends, I’ve had a day. I hit the ground running early this morning with some high-gear multitasking: grading my final set of papers for the week, washing out some clothes in the bathroom sink (cheaper and easier than hauling everything to the laundromat), doing the dishes, and furiously trying to clean up my apartment.  I leave tomorrow (today, really) for San Francisco, where my parents live, so packing and cleaning are essential.

After grading and handling my chores, I somehow found the time to work out, shower, dress, run errands, and then drive to campus for the end-of-the-year department potluck.  Afterwards I hung out for a couple of hours before going to my weekly reading group meeting, which ran over two hours, ending at 9:30.  Then it was back home to do more cleaning and pack.  I have way more than any sensible person will need for a 1 week stay, but given that it has been 55 degrees and raining in SF, I need to have winter and summer options available.  Whew.

At any rate, writing!  I feel like I’ve got whiplash from how fast this year seems to be speeding by; I’m not quite sure where May went, and here we are, half-way through the year!  What has astonished me is how much progress I’ve made with this novel in such a short period of time.  I began writing at the beginning of May, and it’s really taken shape over the past few weeks.  To illustrate:

Daily writing output

Wordcount graph

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I’ve done my best to add on a little bit each day since my last check-in, and I’ve found that writing first thing in the morning seems to work really well.  My mind is fresh, I’ve had a chance to “sleep on” the problems or challenges I may have run into the day before, and after a little tweaking here, and a bit of adding there, I end up reaching my daily word count goal without too much strain.

Once I’ve dealt with grading final papers and the like, I may bump up my daily goal to 500 words, since I’m surpassing 300 words so easily.  Now that my confidence has been built up a bit, I can make myself work a little harder.

I’m excited for my 5 hour drive tomorrow, since I’ll be able to let my mind wander.  I’ve got a pocket recorder downloaded on my cell phone so I can record any interesting writing ideas that come to mind.  In the days to come, I’m going to be focused on characterization.  My protagonist, Liandre, has just discovered that her whole life is a lie, and I want to make sure that her reaction to this news is realistic.  We’ll see how it goes!

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